Some people recognize, working or travelling through foreign countries as a compelling cause for individuals in order to learning a new language,conversely,others harshly critique the former viewpoint as they genuinely agree foreign languages can be learned at a service of evolving in various fields. I support the latter assertion on the account of believing this truism that individuals' goals for being a bi-lingual, tri-lingual or multi-lingual person are not absolutely tightened to a subject of working or travelling abroad. However, countless reasons ranging from applying for scholarship to potent personal aims can be highly encouraging for some to pick up on learning an entirely new language.
To commence, let me put a light on first ideology which is totally supported by some. These people are of the opinion that learning a new language is merely restricted to the zone of travelling or working overseas. To follow this opinion, for clearing things up, I would mention the importance of knowing the language of the country that you favor to live or work in, which is avoiding any potential misinterpreting. To put it more simply if any person fancies living or working in a country with an unfamiliar language, it is absolutely vital for that person to know that language for being in a safe zone of understanding about going on spoken conversations or interactions between people. Therefore, these people are highly determined learning that new language, which they are in need of speaking it in a total new environment.
Despite the first viewpoint, others hold a various belief as they argue other leading causes can be encouraging for individuals to learn a new language. To deem the first cause, I would highlight the purpose of pursuing study programmer in other countries, which need a satisfying level of proficiency in that language and it should be proven by a valid certification. Hence these people ought to become a fluent user in that novel language. Further and frequent, some people take up learning languages as a leisure pursuit since they are in love with learning new things, besides they believe learning a new language could provide them the chance of being familiar with a new culture and it would bring them a huge enjoyment as well as a sense of pleasure. Moreover, it's highly proven by scientists that learning a new language can decline mental disorders by 37 percent. A recent research which is conducted by a group of Australian linguists, has proved that people who know a second or a third language would be in a low risk of suffering from dementia, which is a mental relating to aging process.
By way of conclusion, while some people think, there is a strong link between learning a foreign language and working or travelling in foreign nations, it seems to me more genuine, individuals' purposes for learning a new language can be related to educational issues, advancing their memories or any other personal aims.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, conversely, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2486.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 490.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07346938776 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06700135194 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491836734694 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1409431893 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.733333333 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301345745563 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112894405785 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793166725568 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21494657676 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426088944503 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.