Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There is an ongoing controversy over whether to use a foreign language for study or work aboard is the only purpose for studying it. Somebody don’t think that there is the objective other than to use it in other country. However, in my opinion, I believe that learning new language can be caused by several reasons such as entertainment and part time job.
First, some people like to spend their time on the entertainments from other countries, such as computer games from and movies from Japan or India, but it will be more fun, if they understand the language used in those media. Because some of computer games and movies have no translated versions, learning the new language is needed for someone who want to make their leisure time more fun. For example, my friend, who obsesses with movies so much, want to fully comprehend his favorite Japanese movie, so that he study Japanese by himself from the internet. Now he can use Japanese well, and translate Japanese movie for others as a hobby, making him so happy that he can do what he likes for others.
Second, a foreign language can use as a part time job that create more income for people. Nowadays, technology make it easy to create money from anywhere in the world and being a translator or a language teacher online takes not much time. Mobile application named “iTalki”, the platform that connects languages teacher with someone to need to learn them, is an example of this career. There are massive of languages available there, and tons of teachers, who can teach from even their bedroom. Clearly, learning language can create a job, even though that one doesn’t live aboard.
In conclusion, there are many reasons to study new languages as described and I am strongly convinced that using those languages aboard is the only reason of knowing them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...Second, a foreign language can use as a part time job that create more income for people....
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242424242424 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.151515151515 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0853994490358 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0413223140496 0.0501214627716 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0578512396694 0.0437548338989 132% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123966942149 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0358126721763 0.0403226058552 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62726307363 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0247933884298 0.0326793684256 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.068870523416 0.0861772015684 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0192837465565 0.021408717616 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0165289256198 0.011925033212 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1842.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86624203822 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337579617834 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261146496815 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18152866242 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0859872611465 0.137316102897 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62726307363 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 59.9284209895 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 24.1538461538 20.7743622355 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5795802541 49.517814964 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.692307692 127.492653851 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7743622355 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.814263465372 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 50.2684958354 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.6043956044 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359907190565 0.332605444948 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142300277772 0.102741220458 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0797022375502 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.527489858021 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149616376216 0.148594505496 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142304315623 0.134430193775 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060087243829 0.0742795772207 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260794801079 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0187425556207 0.0638462369009 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244141880212 0.228012699653 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509376038384 0.058150111329 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.