Communicate between two different nation speakers has always been a serious problem since human era started. Therefore, studying foreign language is a priority, even though there are some thoughts on if it is only useful for traveling or working abroad.
Language is not only a connecting tool for human, but it is also a cultural exchange gate. People learning foreign language can explore a completely different world, either through Internet or novels and films. Besides, it would be easier for people to go on an excursion if they excel a lingo. In some cases, people might get lost or have trouble, knowing the native tongue is a great bonus in solving things.
Furthermore, language has a great impact in occupation. People knowing multi languages should catch a chance to improve their living standards by working overseas. This scenario is no longer stranger to developing countries, when a large amounts of their citizens tend to apply for a new position in the developed one, due to the good exchange rates. Moreover, things go easier for people who acquire several languages to set up a business in an international environment. Once the language barriers remove, trade agreements and opportunities will come together.
In short, while mastering more than one language gives a positive effect for either traveling or offering a well paid job, I have a fully trust on the advantage of commanding other tongues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'amount'?
Suggestion: amount
...r to developing countries, when a large amounts of their citizens tend to apply for a n...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('fully') instead an adjective, or a noun ('trust') instead of another adjective.
...ing or offering a well paid job, I have a fully trust on the advantage of commanding other to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in short, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11158798283 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77966501656 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682403433476 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.069745935 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222971879904 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749096490163 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660139522772 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127103411317 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425365530083 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.