some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting To what extend do you agree or disagree

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some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Although the need of handwriting reduced due to the emergence of modern gadget in these days, the significance of written works has not changed. Many experts argued that it is not necessary for the young people to learn writing skills in their life, as their modern world demand more work on the computer rather than the traditional way of maintaining files. However, I totally disagree with the notion as writing is an important means of communication and learning things much faster for youngsters.

To commence with, there is a plethora of reasons why writing skills are pivotal in the child's development. First and foremost point is that it helps youngsters learn language faster than any other method. For instance, in many schools in India, where students are maintaining notebooks for each subject for note down the things they learnt in school. This would benefit the juvenile to understand and comprehend the complete meaning. Moreover, this has a role in effective communication. To cite an example, research conducted in children association in the UK suggested that children can better express themselves through handwritten letters than emails. Therefore, the writing skill is inevitable in every child's life.

Needless to say, there are some negative effects for the young people who do not learn writing. Firstly, this might lead them to rely on the computers for long hours. Since spending too much time on the blue screen on gadget would damage their eyesight. Thereby, the juvenile would wear spectacles in their early life. Secondly, many schools still conduct written exams. To illustrate this, the university of London reported the young people are more prone to commit spelling mistake in exam paper as 90 % of students using computer for preparing notes. This happens due to the spell checker in the computer would help children to reduce mistakes in their typing. But they would not encourage them to learn vocabulary and spelling.

To conclude, despite the emergence of modern technology, the handwriting still holds higher heights. It is the duty of parents and teachers to encourage children to write more to express their ideas, thoughts and feelings in a better way

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to write'.
Suggestion: to write
...necessary for the young people to learn writing skills in their life, as their modern w...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to write'.
Suggestion: to write
...s for the young people who do not learn writing. Firstly, this might lead them to rely ...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o rely on the computers for long hours. Since spending too much time on the blue scre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20505617978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64469089174 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3298996164 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.65 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114144280907 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325145938412 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399685230734 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731184961062 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171619634467 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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