There is a conundrum among people about of whether sports plays a paramount role in people life or it is merely a leisure activity. I will shed light on both opinions of the aforementioned statement and will further delineate it with plausible reasons followed by a reasonable opinion.
Commencing with those who claim that sports play beneficial role in society. The predominant reason is it s helps people to enhance their overall growth and also earn from sports. To explicate it,in this contemporary era, people are living sedentary lifestyle due to which they face several health problems. By participating in sports they can maintain their body and it also helps individuals to make body fit and fine by doing regular exercise. Along with this there a several sports completions run by government by which humankind earns handsome money.To epitome, a survey was conducted by health organization in 2019 has revealed that 70% individuals do workout. Therefore, maximum people get fame and also good health.
As far as I am concerned I advocate in the favor of latter statement. The reason behind this people play sports to fresh their mood. In other words,in this modern era, the majority of persons are working due to which they get frustrated from their work and cannot spend quality time with their loved ones. To overcome the stress they play sports as an entertainment . To exemplify, there was a headline in the newspaper that to avoid stress play games.Thus, individuals do not face health problems such as back pain, cervical and depression.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that sports play a vital role in society. Owing to the fact that it helps to maintain the posture of the body and also people get relieve from the problems that the faced in their daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0067114094 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73451410035 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55033557047 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.280845063 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151270976252 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610728271175 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521170195203 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872558644059 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568152751623 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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