Some people say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that some skeptics would advocate that the importance of activities relating to sports in society is undeniable. Nevertheless, there are others who argue that playing sports is just a free time activity. In this essay, I will outline my idea to support the former idea.
To begin with, some people think that playing sports is just one of many activities which can be done in their past time in order to remain healthy. In fact, playing sports frequently may help individuals to keep a well-proportioned body and prevent from suffering dangerous diseases such as cancer and heart attack. For example, by spending at least half an hour every day on jogging, I can enhance my stamina as well as my flexibility, which results in the more effective daily work and study.
Apart from a regular activity, I strongly believe that the influence of sports in society is considerable. Firstly, there is a significant increase in the number of organizations whose works associate with sports. In details, these organizations have the authority and responsibility to manage many professional sports tournaments and competitions which attract numerous people around the world to watch and enjoy. As a result, sports can play a role as the means of entertainment in society which can bring happiness and relaxation for spectators. Secondly, since sports are becoming prevalent in the community, they also have many financial advantages. For example, in football, not only do football players can receive huge salaries and bonuses for their good performance but their managers may also take benefit of money generating by using their well-known players for advertising.
In conclusion, although some people believe that sports are merely a leisure activity, I suppose that sports are vital in society due to their advantages to people in terms of entertainment and finance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, at least, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22847682119 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99280784886 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9367186412 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.9230769231 7.06120827912 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176448605091 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644504802706 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519919771379 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122296849682 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367301816625 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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