There are controversial arguments on the importance of sports for the society. While some consider them as solely recreational activities, I personally believe they also have some crucial roles in our lives.
From one side, apparently sports are accounted for one of the popular entertainments among people, As some of them devote lots of time on supporting their favorite team. They not only follow sports matches and news, but also play sports in their free time. For instance, when we go to the parks, we see different age groups playing various sports like football or volleyball. Hopefully, governments are inclined to allocate funds into enhancing sports facilities, since this is a beneficial type of entertainment for society members.
From the other side, although sports are a significant part of leisure activities, they also play other pivotal roles in our lives. First of all, being physically active prevents us from becoming fat, since our mandatory lifestyles has exposed us to obesity and other health problems. Therefore, sports act like a drug for curing our health difficulties as well as preventing more diseases. In addition, sports have some mental effects too. The hormones that spread in our body while we are physically active, result in better mood and mental state. As an example, whenever I am depressed, a short run simply reverses my attitude.
In conclusion, despite the fact that sports act as recreational activities, they are also an undeniable source of physical and mental health. Thus, their importance should not be underestimated.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30278884462 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89984561958 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6878726557 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182016870612 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646635985879 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037799427285 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108983392201 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260331209337 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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