Some people say that technologies such as mobile phones are disrupting social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that modern gadgets such as smartphones interrupt social interaction. This essay disagrees with that suggestion because of keeping in touch with native people and being the first in line to receive the news is beneficial developments for human beings and cell phone applications provide it easily.
With the appearance, improvement and proliferation of the technologies the society come into the new era of communication. People have always tried to keep in touch with family members or friends and now it is possible due to the use of mobile phones. The obvious advantage of this is to reach people about who we worry immediately and sometimes the meaning of time connection can be crucial. The main example of it is the US famous service 911, which helps people around the country with their problems through just a call.
If only in the previous century to get the news people need to buy the newspapers and magazines or have access to radio or TV, now any kind of possible information all over the world can be received by prolific gadget users instantly throughout the smartphones applications which are in free access. For instance, a recent statistical research revealed that more than 90% of customers of Android providers installed different applications that supply them with international news using the access to the internet sources.
In conclusion, despite some have opinion that mobile phones disrupt the communication, this essay supports the idea that cell phones provide entire services for users from the unlimited interaction between them to the free access to the last news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15151515152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84646930626 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5285033555 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.111111111 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159867397875 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618964936599 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486069319107 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997467188906 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566620137474 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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