Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behaviour while others say that amount of time children they spend watching tv influences their behaviour. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As many young children spend time watching a variety of tv programmes considerably, some people believe that young people's behaviours are affected by various contents on TV. Meanwhile, others argue that different adolescents' behaviours rely on the amount of time they spend to watch tv. This essay will discuss both statements and reveal my personal opinion.
On the one hand, it cannot be denied that some behaviours of the youth are substantially influenced by tv programmes they have watched. Since many youngsters, these days are fond of watching dramas and films related to crimes and criminals; they could be exposed to severe violence and aggressiveness. Therefore, various unpleasant images of crimes scenes are generally likely to impact on distorted cognitive development as well as an increase in the level of violence adversely to children.
On the other hand, children' behaviours also can be significantly changed because of the amount of time spent on watching tv. The more they young enjoy watching tv programmes, the more they tend to be too much addicted to it. The problem is that many of them focus much less on studying and doing homework given at home compared with their counterparts, so their academic performance and grades are lower than the average students who seldom watch tv dramas. Moreover, children can be at risk of being obesity when they have too much of their time to watch tv programmes. This is because while watching tv, they usually sit or lay down on a sofa or a bed commonly. Hence, the lack of physical movement leads them to potential health concerns.
To sum up, some behaviours in a generation of adolescents could be profoundly affected by different tv programmes and the amount of time they consumed for watching tv. However, I personally, believe that diverse television contents have powerful influences on the way children behave.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13268608414 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85517604481 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6433142834 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456617932434 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15808823171 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981741465585 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285726423524 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905120322903 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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