Some people support the development in agriculture such as factory farming and scientific creation of new types of fruits and vegetables. Others oppose this view and support other developments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
technology has given hike to many food industries as well as innovation in biotechnology produced things and it is highly dominated to the our nature. However, few people endorse that the industry farming and creativity of sciences in agriculture is much better for many parts of the city while other are against to these sort of advancements so the essay will enunciate both argument in detail.
To originate from, because of modernisation has throw an impact to agricultural demands where as many more farm factories has been established in every geographical parts of the world. In numerous industries, there are many advanced machines which has given a rise to agricultural development and it saves time a lot during process of harvesting. For instance, latest technology bestow us everything where tractors , doers makes the job of harvesting and cultivation very readily.
Another point of this, in a contemporary era , improvement of science has gained a value in this extent even it is started origination in various species of fruits and vegetables which everything covered in biotechnology. many people are against with this kind of development. In fact plenty of people like to live ordinary lifestyle as their ancestors do. Nevertheless, people are still using the conventional practices way of harvesting and cultivation of land for example, there was survey conducted by Mahendra tech in Amritsar, where they were predicted that, half of the farmer are still using the traditional tools for farming and don't rely on machines even opponents of the company providing them free tractors.
In summary, both aspects have their own importance. it is clear, smart machines blessed us a lot and made our job easy but in point of view, traditional ways are f better than technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact, in summary, kind of, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20415224913 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01415514818 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622837370242 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0068867798 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.727272727 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128923187148 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441945416475 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308234388953 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069967425847 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110153170073 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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