Some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while other think that it is a waste of time discuss both side and give your opinion.
Art is a skill of people and also referred to creative thinking of a people. The expression or application of human creative skills and imagination, also called an art. In this question a main question arises that it should be introduced in schools or not; it is beneficial or waste of time? In this message through my opinion I give detail about both sides with good epitome.
Art refers to a hidden talent between children as well as in younger. Through this process, children make some creative things with their imagination. Art also include many things such as; painting dancing singing and so on. Moving further, some children make art for their relaxation. Every people have many technique to reduce burden. Some humankind prefer music or watching movies but art is crucial way to decrease the stress. Through this, children always show their emotion as well as feelings.
On the other hand, some mankind trust that it impact on the children. They believe that, art distract the children. Mostly, parents do not allow to children for participating in art field. Moreover, they also think that when children joint art they also distract from studies and
do not perform efficiently in the studies. If children to do not get good marks so, it also impact on career because of, nowaday competition is increased. Children, which get good marks only they can achieve job. A good epitome for this, it also create extra burden because children mostly engaged in art as well as have more syllables in studies.
In summary, school must be encouraged to have a balanced set of subjects for children including academic, sports and arts. In my opinion, students should at least know the basics of Arts and should not be a novice to the subject art, because we need more artists in the future ahead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, at least, in summary, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88273615635 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49637664619 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57003257329 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1141446934 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.95 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.35 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303705279614 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885640402602 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448470001609 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16000241562 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512102744246 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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