Some people think that artificial intelligence is very important to human’s future developmet while others think that it has negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give ur opinion.
The term Artificial Intelligence (AI) refers to the simulation of human intelligence in machines programmed to think like humans and mimic their actions. It is often argued that Artificial Intelligence will bring about a range of benefits in the foreseeable future. Others, however, fear that immense risks might be posed by this kind of intelligence. From my perspective, developing Artificial Intelligence implicates both benefits and risks.
On the one hand, artificial intelligence has proved to have tremendous advantages. Firstly, it can fulfill risky and laborious tasks instead of human. Going to mars, defusing a bomb, exploring the deepest parts of oceans, AI can be used effectively in such situations where intervention can be hazardous without wearing out easily. Secondly, machines equipped with this edge-cutting technology are capable of completing duties better than humans, especially in areas that require great accuracy or calculations using large amounts of data. Lastly, AI’s ability to work ceaselessly and tirelessly with incredible speed can certainly boost the productivity in every field related. For these reasons, AI will steadily improve our life quality.
On the other hand, Artificial Intelligence’s rapid progress could be seen as a threat to humankind. In the short term, it is likely that we will see an escalation in unemployment rate caused by machines or software programs. Doctors, for instance, are victims as robots are becoming more accurate and prudent in diagnosing and doing surgeries. A longer-term fear is that computers become so intelligent that they begin to make decisions without human permission and then manipulate our planet. This would probably lead to a war between humans and intelligent machines, bearing a detrimental impact on the entire world.
In conclusion, I do believe AI will benefit human in various ways. However we need to be invariably alert and critical with the potential risks an intelligent robot can cause
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mar'.
Suggestion: mar
...orious tasks instead of human. Going to mars, defusing a bomb, exploring the deepest...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... AI will benefit human in various ways. However we need to be invariably alert and crit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51307189542 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07652446386 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66339869281 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4030719123 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2352941176 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143000125759 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465976925096 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526811043178 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890582707013 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576049894843 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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