Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education, whereas others say this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It has been well-accepted that having academic degrees is of the utmost importance to embrace success in life. However, others believe that there are many more factors behind someone's success rather than a bunch of professional certifications.
On the one hand, universities provide academic knowledge that is necessary to work. Students are given opportunities to gain both wisdom and practical experiences. There is little room for doubt that students have the best environment to explore and develop themselves in colleges thanks to acquainted professors and high-quality curriculums. Moreover, studying at educational institutions would propose not only multiple scholarships but also job offers from many companies. Last but not least, candidates who own scholastic certificates irrefutably stand a higher chance of getting the job than the ones who don't. Most employers believe that set graduation is one of the basic requirements when it comes to recruitment.
On the other hand, there are innumerable conditions that help people succeed without applying for prestigious establishments in modern times. For instance, Tiger Woods is an elite athlete in the world who does not hold any academic degrees, and he has still managed to become successful. Furthermore, demand for workers has been increasing significantly due to the growth of the population. As a result, businesses have a tendency to employ people from all walks of life.
While getting university certifications is the best way to ensure people's success, a minor majority of people assume that social skills, ambitions, and workable experiences are more meaningful. In my opinion, it is crucial to obtain higher education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55212355212 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17606468613 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660231660232 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6081433865 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16816913766 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468694868541 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412113194788 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992346051642 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456920074282 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.