Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traffic accidents is accountable for losses of valuable resources and the lives of hundreds of thousands of lives each year. To alleviate the impact of the phenomenon, some advocate to the increased age for drivers of vehicles. I some what disagree with the idea as it would spell trouble for people and society, albeit there are advantages associated with the point of view.
Restriction on ages for driving cars and motorbikes may take a toll on people's lives in many dimensions. It is common that cars or motorbikes are the main mode of transit of many young individuals. If these people are deprived of the opportunities to drive, their private lives are likely to be interuptted, rendering them unable to go to school, purchase necessities, or hang out with their friends. Additionally, preventing young drivers from participating in driving may be a waste of social resources. Young people can become qualified drivers of vehicles, transporting passengers and goods. Imposing limitation on the age of people who drive functional vehicles would disable a certain proportion of the workforce, which in turns increase the cost of labor, exerting pressure on the work market.
Admittedly, the attendence of young vehicles users may have negative implications on people safety. The major concern is that young minds tend to attend to reckless driving behaviors namely speeding, drunk driving, disobeying traffic regulations. These inappropriate acts while driving, however, can be mitigated by either early trainings or educations upon the significance of people's well-being.
In sum, I mostly object to the raise of minimum age of drivers. Even though the application would reduce the damages young drivers may have on the society, it causes problems for people's daily lives as well as wastes the human resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: SOME_WHAT_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhat' (=slightly)?
Suggestion: somewhat
...ncreased age for drivers of vehicles. I some what disagree with the idea as it would spel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36332179931 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95256902054 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5498839606 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214992113935 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762687008564 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578166445667 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122575736868 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569114428191 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.