Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believed that by giving longer sentence to offenders could effectively reduce crime, in contrast, others think that it is actually counterproductive. And I tend to agree with the latter.
To a certain degree, server punishments like longer sentence could help to reduce crime rate. For example, if the federal government rise the sentence term for trivial crimes, some potential offender may weigh their choices and choose to avoid commit a crime as the cost of crime has gone up.
However, it is more reasonable to consider that punishment is not the key to eliminate crime, as the second view shows. In a real life situation, criminals may not take into the consequences of their action into consideration before they broke the law. For instance, it would not make much difference to bank robbers whether they are going to be jailed for 25 years or 30 years, their will to rob a bank is not dependent on the punishment because they normally choose to run away from justice. So, in this case, loner sentence cannot reduce crime whatsoever.
In my opinion, the impact of giving more server punishment is limited. At the meantime, more effective ways such as community services and provide better education for citizens probably are better method to eliminate crime from the origin.
To summarize, I tend to agree with the second view that bring longer sentence is not the best way to reduce crime, and there are definitely more effective ways to help the government to reduce crime rate.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96062992126 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65978610962 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562992125984 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2429258485 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.545454545 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329477394595 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125063641928 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109080498191 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202534002484 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900108750082 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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