The diagrams give information about three major life stages of salmon, a type of large size fish, from different perspectives such as reproduction, growing to maturity and migration. In general, salmon fish could grow form tiny eggs to as large as seventy-six centimeters and live in at least three different types of water environments.
The life cycle of a salmon starts with small salmon eggs laid by mature fish in slow moving upper river, covered with reeds as well as small stones in case of potential predators. Normally it would take five to six months for a baby salmon referred as ‘fry’ to born. Then, flowing with fast water to the lower river, baby salmons would spend the next approximately 4 years in the lower river until they turn into teenager salmon ‘smolt’.
By the time they reaching the size of twelve to fifteen centimeters, the open sea water with abundant food sources would replace former habitat as a more favorable migration destination for smolt, whose size would grow further to seventy to seventy-six centimeters, and this stage usually takes around 5 years.
After salmon turning into maturity, they would however return to their birthplace, the upper river, to lay eggs for reproduction, and the new life cycle of salmon begins again.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, well, at least, in general, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12264150943 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83785126221 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2955241454 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.142857143 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208627021545 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108150796788 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715026353475 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125684700586 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776973652773 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.