Some people think that changing jobs periodically is good. what is your opinion?
People have different views about the way to achieve a successful career. While trying out different jobs can give better chances to find the perfect position, I believe that having a defined career direction at an early stage tend to lead to greater results.
On the one hand, I think settling down early can be extremely beneficial to one's career. Firstly, by doing that, you can build up working experiences at a young age and quickly become an expert in your own. It is a big advantage for your career in the long run which would help achieve higher up positions in the organisation. For example, most NGOs require at least 5 to 7 years of relevant working experiences for their manager roles. secondly, by staying at a company for a long time, workers can establish a large network that can be helpful to their jobs. Finally, the early adaptation to the working environment and company culture can maximize their skills and potential and help achieve their goals at a speedy time.
However, some people have their own reasons to change jobs frequently. Nowadays, it is not an early task for young workers to find a suitable job. Recent research shows that 70 percents of fresh graduates in Vietnam do not work in their professions. Therefore, they keep seeking new opportunities. Also, the most important factor of a long _running career is job satisfaction. Instead of sticking to a job that you start to lose interest in, taking up different roles can be joyful experiences that makes you realize where you truly belong to.
In conclusion, pursuing a successful career in my opinion is a long and winding road that requires a clear indication, patience and the confidence to make changes when needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7337883959 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60081248052 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569965870307 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 293.0 20.2975951904 1444% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1387.0 106.682146367 1300% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 293.0 20.7667163134 1411% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 144.0 7.06120827912 2039% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133449279878 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133449279878 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818451662877 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357269462676 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 147.3 13.0946893788 1125% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -217.46 50.2224549098 -433% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 116.4 11.3001002004 1030% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.63 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.94 8.58950901804 255% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 119.2 10.1190380762 1178% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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