Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views you’re your opinions.
There has been much discussion about formal education that people agree children may start their learning sooner to offer benefits. While it can be argued that children should set up their study at least 7 years old. I strongly believe that learning at least 7 years old will be far more significant.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why children ought to learn at an early age would give many benefits. First and foremost, need to that the development of children on learning academic subjects would have some positive influence. The reason for this is because children are able to accumulate knowledgeable and handy things especially catching up the heavy education system in Vietnam. Secondly, if children have a chance to study at school, this means that is as one of the most optimum way to promote their maturity. It is thought that children will be accountable for all their actions. For example, children make a mistake with their friends at school, they are willing to send apology to their friends then look for a good solution to compensate for their wrongdoings.
Despite these attractions, children’s learning at least 7 years old is still a better choice for the comprehensive development. Firstly, it is advisable that increasing children’s health always prioritize the development of children. By playing a sport such as running, swimming, these are the goal to provide children to keep healthy not only physical appearance but also mental condition. The consequence of playing sport will make the contribution to eliminating the sedentary lifestyle which exerts adverb impact on children nowadays. Secondly, it is the importance of learning soft skills that should be encouraged for children. There is a high likelihood that it supports children not only adapt to the new environment but also overcome the challenge quickly in their life.
For these reasons mentioned above, children can be developed better if their learning may start at least 7 years old.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...positive influence. The reason for this is because children are able to accumulate knowled...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, at least, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19444444444 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81601088677 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7346993217 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.1875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259051016608 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095142556992 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575292202733 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181519605865 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568546687016 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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