Some people think that children's free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time.
What is your opinion?
In the world with such global controversies , there is likely to arise a debate about usage of children's leisure time in educational and entertaining ways. While educational efforts seem to be a sensible idea , meanwhile I do not feel entertaining way as a completely impractical in expanding time through which I will explain why.
On the one hand , dedicating leisure time for distraction seem to be possible due to the viewpoint of scientists in the sphere of psychology who consider expanding a little time in this way as a normal phenomenon for children in the age of 7-11. In that case,according to this standpoint children's option may be directed on the way of watching TV or even playing video games after a school day through which they could be able to get a relax . Scrutinizing these , it turned out to be an clear that expanding a limited amount of spare time in this way by young pupils might be allowed.
On the other hand , one could ask whether the extensive spending time in this way is a proper method for parents to open up their children's hidden prospects , especially when we are seeing a worldwide development in all realms. So that ,this preference tends to be replaced by the option about appearance of educational activities which at the same time can involve an extra lessons aiming to broaden little ones' horizons in the definite subjects.Further , and even more importantly , though , this choice would be able to act as a major role of appearing desirable academic achievements among pupils at their school in future that also seems to be really demanded by the school's administration now.
To sum up , whilst expending free time for entertainment might be deemed as an undeniable at this point of life , above all , though , I would contend that entailing educational lessons needs to be gradual process with the huge positive impacts on the children's mental development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, really, so, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9125 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99481426377 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.324395712 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.5 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166499101403 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850737561861 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266196523016 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113456259756 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022638997496 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.