There is no doubt that tourism industry helps many nations develop their economy which leads to more employment opportunities and new network infrastructure of host community. The opinion is divided on the matter. There are people who believe tourism has detrimental effect on cultural heritage of a nation if it is only used to increase profitability. However, others hold the opinion that this helps the host country to rehabilitate its traditions. This essay intends to delve into both sides before forming an opinion. I personally side with the latter.
To begin with, although tourism has brought a lot of benefits to many countries especially those ailing weak or fragile economy, it has deleterious effects on environment and resources. The areas that were once to be pristine are filled with luxury hotels, commercial airlines, large shopping malls and resorts. The heavy construction and the machinery used for building such tourist destination cause many problems such as soil erosion, loss of virgin land and forest just to name a few. This heavy construction equals pollution and rises the price of land which indigent people can no longer afford to buy one. Moreover, the influx of tourists arise problems such as over consumption of resources and over production of waste. Overconsumption of resources bring about water shortage, loss of natural resources. Over production of waste shows itself in the form of water and air pollution. Finally, this tourist centers don’t attract environmentally conscious clientele.
However, to preserve the cultural tradition, local community need to allocate a considerable amount of money which seems unlikely for many countries to earn in a way other than tourism. The money which is attained from tourism industry can also invest in other important sectors such as education, infrastructure of the city, economy and industry, etc. Besides, it helps government to conserve archeological sites which are on the verge of being knocked down. If a country takes a positive approach in alluring travelers from all over the world, it will definitely flourish the country further down the road. To illustrate, china enjoys tourism industry which helps the nation develop its infrastructure by adding more metro lines and improving its roads like the commercial road which was built to cut the long distance to Pakistan.
Overall, I’m of opinion that preservation of cultural traditions very much depends on the economy. To boost the economy, tourism industry can help governments with their expenditure on different areas like education and non-educational purposes including archeological sites.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, moreover, so, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95412812784 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.489306472 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.761904762 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997091694064 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317099924811 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379093261373 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623047934772 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350122812032 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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