Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some that culture traditions will be ruined if they are applied for attracting visitors. Nevertheless, some argue that utilizing cultural traditions in travelling industry is the only method to preserve these traditions. Before presenting my own opinions, I tend to discuss both sides of this issue.
First of all, using cultural traditions to attract travelers may damage traditions themselves. For those natural traditional sited, such as ethnic villages located in mountains, numerous sightseers mean the much more domestic garbage and the increasing local resource consumption, which may overtop the support of traditional area. Besides, when earning money turns to the main purpose, local residents may adjust those traditions to fit tourists’ taste for making much more money. In this way, the old custom will be replaced by the modern-style custom, losing the original meaning of itself.
However, setting culture traditions as money attractions can save those traditions which lack money and labor for surviving. In many developed countries, for instance, India or Thailand, they don’t have enough finance for maintaining historical heritage or reconstructing traditional buildings. Those Buddhist sculptures will be eroded by nature when the local government doesn’t have enough money on repairing. Additionally, there are less and less young generations who are interested in working for traditions. If the local authority uses the profit of travelling to improve the traditional worker’s salary, young adults may be attracted by those high-paid jobs. Hence, attracting travelers may be the method of saving traditions.
From my perspective, both two sides of this issue should be taken into consideration. Governments should invest some money to support the basic needs of cultural traditions and properly open some traditional sites to tourists for visiting as well. What’s more, local authorities should ensure that the number of tourists are under controlled, encouraging young adults to work for traditions.
Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240331491713 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.182320441989 0.155533422707 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10773480663 0.0946595960268 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.024861878453 0.0501214627716 50% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0220994475138 0.0437548338989 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104972375691 0.122226691241 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0828729281768 0.0403226058552 206% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.06871164525 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.024861878453 0.0326793684256 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.085635359116 0.0861772015684 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0331491712707 0.021408717616 155% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0193370165746 0.011925033212 162% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2075.0 1933.35771543 107% => OK
No of words: 307.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.75895765472 6.12580529183 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.436482084691 0.374742101984 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.345276872964 0.28420135186 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.28013029316 0.203846283523 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.214983713355 0.137316102897 157% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06871164525 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592833876221 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 65.5497558523 60.7387585426 108% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1875 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4807466634 49.517814964 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.6875 127.492653851 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 53.7151872964 49.1944974215 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.86746987952 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3378958739 0.332605444948 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0781587426155 0.102741220458 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0633303313116 0.0668466124924 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482056705541 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114217619067 0.148594505496 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128542730499 0.134430193775 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758333874238 0.0742795772207 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.303913213635 0.324371583561 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0912219564832 0.0638462369009 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240530922191 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078894460215 0.058150111329 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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