There is no denying this conviction that, cultural traditions plays a pivotal role to widen the horizons of masses regarding historical sites and customers . It has been argued among masses that tourism deteriorate conventional norms whereas, others opine that it build values and saves tradition . This essay will going to discuss both views in upcoming paragraphs before forming any opinion .
People who advocates that, tourism not only exploit culture but also, deter beliefs and way of living . To explain it, as influx of various culture especially western culture which have been negative impact on people. An optimal example, nowadays in my country youngsters more enticed by British culture as in foreign culture people call by their name now children of India also started stated their elders by their name . As a result, this have show that masses loss their cultural values . Another reinforcing factor is, on outfits . As numerous of tourists wear their own culture dresses whether there are vulgar or indecent owing to this masses of native country following the footsteps of tourists in terms of dressing and they create nuisance . Consequently, indegenious citizens break the shackles and easily continue with wrong habits received from commuters.
On the other hand , some people thought that tourists secure tradition because government ameliorate the infrastructure of historical site to make it inviting place , by doing so there heritage become safe and many people within nation can easily access and learn their rituals and customs by seeing them.
Furthermore, tourists location are enhanced with picturesque and accurate reflection of rituals , culture so it would not only advantageous to gain knowledge by local people but also people who travel within one nation . For instance , a very fascinating place is Ayodhaya under province of Uttar Pradesh government leave no stone unturned to make it impressive and knowledgeable by marvels sculptors , painting . As a result by making more exciting people learn beyond their potential .
To conclude, as per my opinion , numerous of benefits by visitors , yet its darkside , never be undermined of exacerbate impact on native people lives .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, regarding, so, whereas, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4269005848 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74013098536 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640350877193 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0743384511 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.733333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216893159928 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644549145429 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408765913223 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110962766043 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339166093148 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.