Some people think that employers should ensure a supportive and pleasant work environment where each employee is respected and valued equally while others think employers should focus instead on providing better facilities and equipment.
criterion of evaluating pleasant work environment varies among distinguishing groups of people. Part of the society believes that company should provide cooperative and impartial atmosphere to their workforce, whereas there is an opposing view of targeting well amenities and facilities. Both perspectives are worth considering and will be justified below.
Obviously, the quality of infrastructure as well as equipments plays a fundamental role on creating employees’ first impression, hence affecting their working attitude and efficiency. For instance, as having to travel to workplace in rush hours with traffic congestions, employees uncomfortably start their daily working days, especially in such a hot weather which is affected by environmental problems, thus decreasing their capacity. Therefore, many companies have installed air conditioners in order to create comfortable atmosphere and release stress formed while commuting. Certainly, the productivity of the companies will be improved.
However, as working for a long period of time, a supportive and pleasant work environment will outweigh the well-equipped one. while the former permanently provides employees with opportunities for further development and cooperation, after months, without impartial atmosphere, the latter will no longer impressed their workers. Take an example of working with an annoying boss who always shouts at his colleagues, thus forming a stressed environment, they will soon lost their motivation, which can seriously lead to a change in their workplace despite how good the facilities the company has provided.
In the conclusion, from all of the viewpoints which have been analyzed above, criterion for proper workforce varies from well-equipped to cooperative one. From my perspective, rather than emphasizing on providing good facilities and amenities, companies should focus on creating environment which positively affects their mental conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08273381295 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28113754179 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654676258993 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1436647084 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.916666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126676675192 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496522955448 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439139408675 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817882554846 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195727159264 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.28 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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