Some people think that government should invest in arts and cultural events Others think that government should invest money on more important things

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Some people think that government should invest in arts and cultural events. Others think that government should invest money on more important things.

The ultimate goal of modern governments is to ensure rapid progress, safety and advancement of their nation. Presently, some people are the opinion that it is imperative for the administration of a nation to make investment in the promotion of art and cultural events.
By contrast, others advocate that spending money on other significant fields should be the priority of modern government. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.

There are manifold points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, investing money on cultural events is the need of an hou...

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Average: 9.6 (6 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56657963446 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12561973622 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582245430809 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5361776036 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9090909091 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4090909091 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86363636364 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322740167813 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674820632435 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647315845317 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129657927481 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709321070664 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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