Some people think that the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects to make progress. Do you agree or disagree?
In present decades, technology becomes too vast and numerous advancements are come in that due to foundation of science which is pivotal part of innovations in technology. Therefore, some masses believe legal authorities should spend maximum funds to teach science related subjects for development rather than other subjects. I agree with this notion , however, I also shed some light on opposition side. Couple of views are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in contemporary settings, technology plays crucial role in all sectors which includes industrialisation, medical, electronic and so on, and science is considered to be their foundation stone. Hence, there are plenty of reasons due to which investment in teaching of science become essential for legal authorities. First and foremost reason I progression of nation. Because, there is a lot of sections in which science is classified, includes biology, chemistry, physical and so on. Hence, if students learn such science subjects according to their interest and gain huge knowledge. Thus, they become interact towards their career in science sector. Due to which, this is leads to progression of nation and their economy to. Because, due to their success work, the nation will recieve international attention and priority. Moreover, science sector becomes aidful to publish especially in catastrophic situations. For instance, last decade, pandemic was going on and lacks of people lose their lives due to COVID-19 virus. Hence, scientists do reasearch on vaccine of that virus and make antibodies to protect public from further contact. Hence, this becomes more beneficial in hilarious situation.
Om contrast, other subjects are also essential because, there are also represent their dominant image. There are plethora of subjects includes history, economics, politics and so on, which provides information regards numerous aspects. For instance, via history, students gain knowledge regards an ancient decades which involves their ancestors, culture, diversity and historical events. Due to which, pupils become intact towards their country and also shows patriotic emotions.
To recapitulate, it seems to me as, although science becomes basic necessity of world in all sections such as in economic development, medical and such sectors. Yet, other subjects are also essential because of their valuable information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69080779944 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90698260048 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596100278552 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9692288667 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8636363636 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3181818182 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175792017886 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497298093196 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468538346559 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104718029993 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551333301398 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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