Some people think that the government should offer financial support and
care to old people, while others think that people should save money for their
future life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a controversy about who will be responsible for older people’s life. Some people argue that government should offer support to them, whereas other people believe that they should save money for their retirement lives. In my view, the combination of personal support and governments support would be a better way to ensure that the elderly can have a stable life.
Many people are strong advocates of the elderly supported by the government, mainly because these supports may enable them to live better lives. Many older people especially those who are single without families are less likely to have an ability to earn their lives. For example, many old people who lost their spouse and lost contact with their family members are unless likely to maintain their daily lives, and governments’ support will save their life. As a result, these older people living conditions can be improved greatly.
However, opponents argue that young people should save money for their retirement life, possibly because they do not want to bring much burden to governments and even want to make contribution to society. Many medical needs and costs occur in the last years of life, and governments may get trouble in economy if governments give them help in these aspects. As a result, these older people can take care of them by themselves, which means that the government do not need to pay much attention to them and have more capital space to build more public facilities that both benefits to them and public.
In my opinion, if the elderly can get support from governments and support themselves, their lives will be better. They can get supports from two ways which make ensure that they have enough money or emotional tie to make their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y or emotional tie to make their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, whereas, for example, as a result, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97959183673 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50803696805 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503401360544 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8451942276 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274812550421 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11768170393 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939234032325 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187777290217 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106328328803 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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