Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but other people claim that it is the individual’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In many countries, ensuring healthcare and education are always at the top priorities of citizens and governments. While many argue that it is the government’s responsibility to allocate money for its people’s healthcare and education, I firmly support the idea that each individual should shoulder the burden of medical and educational services.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why the provision of education and healthcare should be made by the government. Firstly, as people have to pay different kinds of taxes for the authorities, these funds should be beneficial for the citizen in return. Some proportions of the budget might be used to guarantee that all citizens can have access to medical and educational services easily, which also helps to reduce the inequity between areas among a country. The other reason to support the idea is the country can improve its economy by ensuring citizens’ health and education. Having a lot of healthy and sophisticated people means there are more labors, scientists and professionals to make the country sustainably developed.
Despite of the aforementioned arguments, I still believe that each individual must take responsibility to cover the medical and educational costs. One rational reason is that receiving support from the government can create a great dependence on the residents. To raise people’s awareness about protecting their own health and maintain their educational path, they should use the money from their own wallets. For example, covering the costly fees of medical services can make them treasure their own health and might adopt some healthy lifestyle such as eating diet or doing exercise. In addition, there would be less budget to support other domains like environment, military and security if the country spends too much money on healthcare and education, which can hamper this nation from ensuring its sustainable development.
In conclusion, although the government’s support for medical and educational services is advantageous for citizens, I strongly advocate the idea that it should be individuals’ responsibility to pay for these expenses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49848942598 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08711958262 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531722054381 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1507665049 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255113805442 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928061415199 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670771339796 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178688502075 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315761128906 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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