Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but other people claim that it is the individual's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that healthcare and education should be paid by the government or the individual. I, however, believe that basic healthcare and primary education should be paid by the government while advanced healthcare and higher education should be borne by individuals.
On the one hand, it is the government’s responsibility that makes basic healthcare and primary education accessible to the public. The nation’s prosperity depends considerably on their well-educated society who might be treated by good health services. Additionally, we all pay taxes so we are entitled to get something back in return. While private schools and special healthcare treatment are always available to those who can afford them, public schools and basic healthcare system are needed to everyone in the community, especially the deprived people. It should be a government priority that those who live below a poverty line need to be provided free healthcare, consequently, nobody die for want of treatment. Moreover, the government should subsidize for the higher education of a section of the society who are meritorious students, brilliant state workers pursuing further knowledge to contribute to their home country’s development.
On the other hand, individuals should be responsible for their advanced healthcare and higher education. Actually, advanced medical and surgical treatments are expensive; therefore, instead of being governed by the government, individuals should take some health insurance or save in any other way with the tomorrow in mind. Similarly, private schools and higher education benefit individual more than the nation while international schools and studying abroad supply students with a variety of useful skills in order to adapt in the global environment and to become well-rounded citizens. As a result, it is likely more reasonable when these costs are shouldered by the individuals.
In conclusion, while the government should allocate their resources of basic healthcare treatment and primary education to the majority of the society, the individuals should pay for their advanced healthcare system and further education by themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 702, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'dies'.
Suggestion: dies
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, however, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69846153846 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19394990198 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516923076923 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7263239476 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.461538462 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160963677811 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701904259914 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515894193567 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112292847582 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025900138992 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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