Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Art can express emotions without words and it carries cultural, social and ethical history in it.
Art is the best form to understand human emotions; Moreover, the best method to exhibit past, present and future because art has no time limit. So, disbursing currency on art is not an unwanted expenditure for the government, Even though, priority must be taken into consideration such as health, education and food.
Although art is not given paramount importance in many developing and underdeveloped nations, it holds a significant role in the cultural and historical aspects which cannot be ignored. For example,
In India art explicit the cultural diversity and the century-old religious propriety. So can the government spend money lavishly on preserving art forms? Well, the answer is no, why because, there are other areas which the government patronage is more necessary. The fields such as health and food should be the supreme priority.
On the other hand, If the government is completely forgetting about the art could pave a way to the deterrence of cultural amalgamation. For instance, Most of the art forms in India are dying due to the lack of government support. Hence, a standard portion of money can be used for preserving and promoting art. Moreover, art can contribute to economic progress. For instance, Art can be used to advertise tourism and selling artwork can invite handsome money.T hough this country can progress and promote art at the same time.
In my contention, Disbursing a certain amount of money will bring pride and acknowledgement to the nation. But, at the same time, necessary attention should be given to the other areas as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14598540146 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86702468976 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7780508991 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189690327102 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687665658868 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430082027657 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880643059638 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511624230635 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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