Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports. While others think that people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. do you agree or disagree?
Sports play a vital role in people’s life as they provide people countless opportunities for fitness, recreation and entertainment. However, some sports pose great dangers to many individuals. While many people argue that it is necessary for governments to ban hazardous activities, I still belive that people should be at liberty to choose sports of their preferences.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people think that governmants should prohibit dangerous sports. Extreme sports are often quite challenging and require tremendous physical strenghSports play a vital role in people’s life as they provide people countless opportunities for fitness, recreation and entertainment. However, some sports pose great dangers to many individuals. While many people argue that it is necessary for governments to ban hazardous activities, I still belive that people should be at liberty to choose sports of their preferences.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people think that governmants should prohibit dangerous sports.first, Extreme sports are often quite challenging and require tremendous physical strengh and agility, which carries more potential health risks for players. in fact, this kind of sport might be a grave detriment to human ' health and put people' life at risk. second, individuals, especially those who show affection for taking risks, can be addicted to dangerous sports. an excessive amount of time could be spent on hazardous activities if people are eposed to them on a frequent basis. This could lead to the reduction of time for study and work, which should be people's top priority.
On the other hand, I still side with those who argue that people should have freedome to choose which sports they take part in. Infact, many individuals certainly opt for playing sports which provide them with a great deal of relaxtion and joy. If their favourite kinds of sports were prohibited, it would lead to undesiarble outcomes, especially a resentment and negative attitudes towards life. Additionally, people, regardless of gender or financial background should be at liberty to do any sports or activities. In other words, individuals should have freedom to make their own desicions about which sports they play, according to their interests and abilities so that they can feel that they are respected and listened to.
In conclusion, while enacting a ban on dangerous sports is necessary to ensure the safety of people, I still belive that people shold have the right to take part in any sports they like.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, still, while, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33251231527 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94954312637 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43842364532 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4332397587 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.277777778 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377955214462 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135016400228 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794743709506 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24118992715 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527206190315 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.