Some people think governments should spend less money on arts and invest more in education
Do you agree or disagree
In the modern era, education plays a vital role in the development of a country. Some people think that governments need to spend more money on education rather than the art sector, while others do not believe in it. This essay will discuss both views of the argument and why I agreed, all the explanations described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with when the governments allocating more money to the art sector in the national budget, which increases more galleries for international and popular artists, their paintings always sold to wealthy families. It is not beneficial for ordinary people, which is not enhance their interest in arts. Ultimately, owners of art galleries and rich people take full advantage of that money. For instance, in India, over 70% of people not aware of art galleries in various cities. Therefore, although spending more money on the art sector by governments, it is not beneficial for most people in a particular nation.
However, if the authority starting more funding in the education sector, which helps to improve schools, better universities, teachers due to this more people will access education, help in the military and It sector in later years because these sectors require more educated candidates. As a result, since more students aware of the technology, they do more work in companies. Ultimately, which improves developments in a country.
To conclude, despite spending more money on better education systems regardless of thinking about arts, it will helpful for the economy and citizens of a country. In my words, I agreed that governments need to cut money for arts and related sectors, which saves more funds for spending on the education sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enhanced'.
Suggestion: enhanced
...icial for ordinary people, which is not enhance their interest in arts. Ultimately, own...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16129032258 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79855106788 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8140942546 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346442875918 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129714786468 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112316747797 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226725368661 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541155020601 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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