Some people think that health care should be free for everyone. others think that people should pay for their medical cost themselves. Discuss both the views with your own opinion.
Health and fitness are indispensable factor of human lives. People can not take it for granted. Few people opine that, these essential services should be free for all. However, others maintain that, it ought to be paid to everyone. Both the views have their certain valid arguments that will be discussed before making any conclusion.
First of all, everyone's life is dependent on effective medical service. It becomes matter of lives. Therefore, it must be free for everyone. So that poor and needy ones can take maximum benefit form it. Moreover, only sake of money if anyone lose their live, then it is a huge shameful act in terms of humanity. Furthermore, nation's developments are considered on the basis of good health care services available in that particular country. When maximum people are healthy and fit then the economic growth rate would definitely increase at rapid pace. Hence, it usually said that " Health is wealth ". By keeping these reasons in mind government should provide health services free of cost.
In contrary, other may claim that, people do not value free things. If health sector is become free to everyone , then there would be a possibility that people will not take care of their health as hospitals are open for everyone at free of cost. Moreover, this thing is also crucial in doctor's perspective because they may treat their patients quite casually. After some time, it might be a trend that health services are not so effective and useful for people.
Hammering the last nail, it can be said that " To each his own ". In my opinion, medical sectors ought to be free to everyone as there are several people who can not afford expensive medical services and due to this they lose their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90939597315 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42997246197 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8678755391 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.15 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381922886108 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101367324204 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838960503619 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238418058211 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608502939183 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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