in recent decades , Climate change has been receiving a great deal of media attention due to its susbtiantial impact on the human life. Some people agrue that we need to accept it rather than try to stop it. I completely disagree with this opinion, because this is not a good solution to combat climate change.
There are a number of reasons why the coexistence is fraught with pitfalls. First, climate change is usually sharped by human activities rather than nature itself. For instance, most nations relys on carbon-rich fuels like gas, oil in oder to drive the world’s economy, which greatly contributing to global warming.Second, if inhabitan agree to keep enviroment ,corporations, especially in the manufacturing and mining industries, would not. Therefore, it can be implied that if corporations were not held accountable for their contribution to global warming, the issue of climate change would be more serious.
It is more economically sound to actively prevent climate change than to ignore it. In fact the cost we need to deal with the future consequences of climate change can be overwhelming. For example ,the tremendous storm can destroy many destruction and deaths which would take decades to recover.Moreover, Temparature increase can cause the extinction of many species worldwild. For example, people would spend money on establishing natural park to prevent the ecosystem instead of spending in keys field,including education and health care, which leads to an improvement in the quality of life of the whole country.
In conclusion. It is clear that goverments and corporations should actively prevent the climate change rather than to live with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31203007519 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08290437754 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5958578667 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23458644359 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845533597666 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637667449016 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151291041174 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421880065987 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.