Time waits for no one. We should use every single time wisely. There are some ongoing arguments on whether we use our free time for doing something to develop our minds or take a rest. In this essay, I will highlight both of these sides and try to provide sound reasoning for my claims. However, I tend to agree with the notion that, we should develop our mind whenever we get the chance including our pass time.
There are two main reasons behind my point of view. First and foremost, leisure activities such as reading and puzzle solving, help us to broadens our horizons. In other words, with the help of these activities we can break the barriers of knowledge and these also improve our brain. For instance, I prefer to read bedtime book because it helps me to learn and relax at the same time. Secondly, they can be used as a stress buster. To be precise, due to the increasing competition, we cannot divert our minds from the burdens of our lives. Unless we utilise our mind to do different activities, we cannot live peacefully and that leads to higher level of stress. I would like to cite an example. According to an article published on U.S Times, which is a global newspaper, more than 30% work professionals are suffering from mental hassles and as per some doctor's advise, the solution is hidden in the free time activities, which help to mitigate these ailments. Thus, free time is very important in order to train our minds as well as brains.
Conversely, some people argue for the different point of views. They claims there are some benefits of their claims. Firstly, people are already occupied with a lot of strains and because of this they should utilize the free time in order to calm down their minds. For example, nowadays people like to do yoga, which helps to relax our minds, instead of doing some other activities. This makes them hale and hearty. Furthermore, this kinds of process can help to mitigate the obiquitous problems of our lives. In addition, we need enough sleep to recover from the daily pains. Not only this can help us to feel good, it is helpful to avoid some health ailments such as high blood sugar. Therefore, we should learn to train our minds otherwise our daily problems can take a heavy toll from us.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate my opinion by saying that, despite of some mind calm down processes, we should improve our minds. Otherwise, we cannot sustain in the giant world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64516129032 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36768166274 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527649769585 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8333910536 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5384615385 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244198528995 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690780762398 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559253842615 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151712090856 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439875524215 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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