Some people think a job not only provides income but also social life. Others think it is better to develop social life with people you do not work with.
A plenty of research has been don about the social life which is associated with job, but there is an argument that is often asserted that social life should be separated from career life. Although there are some truth to the former, it is true to say that developing a social life with people except colleague would be better.
First of all, it should be stuck in mine that spending many hours at workplace is an inevitable part of people daily life. Besides, social interactions are essential to have an efficient performance since team working is a critical issue. It is evident that people would have some social bonds with their coworkers which brings a new set of concerns. Competitive job market caused people to compete each other more and more. The main contributor is inadequate job opportunities that leads to some conflicts among colleagues with negative consequence that can influence the relationships.
On the other hand, developing a social life outside the workplace is a best way to promote interpersonal skills. Despite the fact that people may have to spend less amount of their time with these groups, but the social bonds between them would be stronger. Intimate friends. As an outstanding instance, are the ones who can help us cope with pressure of work and reduce the stress. There is no competition among these people that cause communication more pleasant. Also, they would be understanding and motivating.
Taking everything into consideration, it seems that promoting social bond with people outside the workplace would be more beneficial rather that coworkers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... a social life outside the workplace is a best way to promote interpersonal skill...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ication more pleasant. Also, they would be understanding and motivating. Taking everything i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78346623254 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2262273281 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399350435653 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130825397859 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861666172105 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260432696853 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086633939305 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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