¬?Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important.
?Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Job-satisfaction is considered more important than job security by some people, while others believe that having a stable occupation would be more beneficial. I, for one, subscribe to the former view based on the following discussion.
Having stable jobs enables workers to have a reliable source of income for their monthly expenses. Countless people are craving for enduring jobs regardless of neither its type nor low-paid salary so that they can meet their expenses. For example, a person starting out in a labor of painting cannot possibly manage the robust finances like kids’ cloths, schools’ tuition fees, and appropriate neighborhood. And, even if they could afford such high costs, it would place a huge mental stress on both employees and their family. Consequently, this employee is willing to land a job which guarantees their monthly-budget rather than being satisfied. Therefore, jobs are better to be chosen based on security than satisfaction.
On the other hand, unhappy employees would bear more burden due to mental pressure. The majority of workers pursuing an unsatisfying career can neither meet deadlines nor take care of daily routines. An unsatisfied worker is always short with their colleagues, they resent their family due to the burden they carry in their workplace. Such situations would definitely affect everything in both professional and personal life. Therefore, their intimates and co-workers are reluctant to interact with such employees due to their constant negative attitude toward surroundings. Free up the same person to enjoy their favorite job, everything would change and they turn into easygoing people.
To recapitulate, people have different ideas toward prioritizing job-satisfaction and job stability based on valid arguments. Considering both sides, I do agree upon the superiority of job satisfaction rather than security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60278745645 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9990063387 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637630662021 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4071266366 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304380492995 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105439292344 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115079118425 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236408849911 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122145724139 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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