Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Today, technology has an impact on every aspect of our lives. A group of people feel that advances in technology like smart phones and their applications are making people sociable while others feel they are not. The paragraphs below shall discuss both sides of the arguments and give my personal opinion.
Generally speaking these days all the humans are addicted to their phones which have various free applications like Facebook, Snapchat, Instagram, Whatsapp and so on. These apps have made communication very easy because people can pass messages, pictures, documents and drafts to one another in a fraction of a second. People can pass messages, pictures, documents, drafts,etc. to one another in a fraction of a second. As a result, people build new friendships and maintain them by sending messages or doing voice calls often.
Although technology is enhancing communication, it has some negative effects. First of all, the face to face communication has drastically reduced. As a result, the bonding among family members is reducing. Actually, technology is building fake relations. For instance, most of the youngsters these days are hooked on to their phone and avoid talking personally or going and meeting family members. This in fact reduces the need to meet people and is making people less social.
To conclude, I personally feel that advances in technology have helped us in many ways but they have a detrimental effect on communication especially among family members. It would be better if people avoid using gadgets when they are with family, especially on occasions like lunch or parties at home.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, so, while, for instance, in fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2337164751 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82015241449 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6484088341 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208228926052 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622196876281 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710426760638 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126097948682 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789388520404 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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