some people think that music is good way to bring people of different ages and culture together. to what extend do you agree or disagree.

Essay topics:

some people think that music is good way to bring people of different ages and culture together. to what extend do you agree or disagree.

The music is universal language which understandable regardless of region and ethnic groups. some people believe that music is best startiegy to overcome differences and increase closeness between variety of age and civilization. In this essay we will discuss that how music explore different cultures and regions a step toward, universal harmony.
The music is considered as recognition of cultures and traditions and each region have its own set of music value. In this conspicuously world because of improvement of technology one can easily access to any type of music. Although a magnificent piece urge different nationalities to discovery its more traditions. For example Indian classical folk music is such appreciated internationally particularly in English speaking countries. Each year almost 15% of total tourists came from these countries which generate a handsome amount of revenue.
however, each region have its own kind of music which attract specific group of people but classical music accepted universally and most popular across the world. Many visitors might not fully understand the language and culture dully but music does not required any translator. For Example, every year a lot of people visit America to attend Justin Berber musical concert and in turn business goes up in Christmas season. People from all age groups and civilization enjoy and make new friends from other region. Although for quite sometime they forget their identity, hence all gather for same purpose.
In this essay we discussed the importance of music in various aspect among many one is unity between people. I totally agreed with statement that music not only way of refreshment but having role in service of bringing cultures together. Without this world would not be so interacting.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...reciated internationally particularly in English speaking countries. Each year al...
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...enerate a handsome amount of revenue. however, each region have its own kind of music...
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...ge and culture dully but music does not required any translator. For Example, every year...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, for example, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37722419929 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81696819941 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644128113879 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5902203 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236050333837 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729836930087 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666881227368 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144774632854 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409328039007 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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