Some people think that is is necessary to use animals for testing medicines or other products intended for human use. Others, however, criticize this as animal cruelty. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.
It is believed by some that experimenting on animals for products and medicines purposed for human is justifiable, whereas some people hold the opinion that this activity is brutality. This essay intends to analyze both perspectives. I personally believe that animal testing for human benefits is inexcusable.
On one hand, the main reason why some people support animal testing is that they consider humans to be at the top of food chain and consider animal killings for food or other purposes logical. Moreover, animals are vital in the medical field. By conducting drug experiments on animals, researchers have developed treatments and cures for many diseases like diabetes, cancer, polio and saved so many human lives. Research on animals like rats, mice, and pigs have led to vaccines for various illnesses.
On the other hand, using animals for drug trials aiding rewards for human beings is inhumane to some. There are various reasons why some people are against it. Firstly, animals are living creatures too and people have no right to exploit them for their selfish motives. Secondly, animals are very different from humans and so what is tested on animals cannot be applied to humans. Also, they are some alternatives available to animal testing like computer models or human volunteers. Finally, animals should not be exploited for products like wool, fur or leather as these are not human necessities and nowadays various synthetic substitutes are available in the market.
To sum up, I would like to reiterate that animal exploitation is unjustified and a cruel activity and there are numerous options available that are cruelty free and need not be tested on animals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20146520147 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64009829629 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.20776566 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430681457929 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157450780873 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881895873308 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260923270984 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11843079993 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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