Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In this day and age, the rapid development of technology has paved the way for a variety of modern gadgets and different forms of social media. Some people perceive that they can keep pace with the world best by reading newspapers whilst I am an advocate of the idea that other media could do that role better.
Turning to the first view, the first and foremost reason why conventional newspapers are strongly supported is that it contents the official news from the government and authorities. Hence, readers can completely count on such prestigious news without any suspects. In addition, the old generation probably struggles with a wide range of social media platforms such as the internet or radio. They are mostly low-tech so that they might not be able to access such cutting-edge gadgets or other means of social media.
On the other hand, it is said that media platforms apart from newspapers are diverse and abundant. Firstly, the input of information is various, from words to voices and from TV, radio to smartphones, laptops. As a result, there is a big chance for us to broaden our horizons. Furthermore, the internet is the endless source of information and available all the time so that individuals can inform themselves immediately and constantly, no matter where they are. For instance, when Apple company release the new phone model, they just need to post a status on social media without needing to make it appeared in newspapers but still can announce to international buyers.
In conclusion, citizens can catch up with the latest news through both forms. However, it will be more advantageous depending on the age groups the readers belong to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the age groups the readers belong to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.975 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74004459594 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2744266148 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255305958975 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776874870199 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675673019125 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144673147727 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433767531961 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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