Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job, whereas others advocate changing jobs from time to time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years it has become far more normal for people to pursue multiple jobs in life. While I accept that individuals can change their careers flexibly, I reckon that it would be better for them to stick with a sustainable job.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why people desire to shift occupations. The first one is that in today's demanding and complicated world, human characteristics and passions are more likely to change rapidly. For instance, a person who was once extremely interested in the arts might be susceptible to new stuff such as education, biomedicine, or even philosophy at some point in life. Furthermore, due to the exploratory and inquisitive personalities of human beings, there is always an eagerness to reach out to dynamic and diverse working environments and new colleagues.
However, I am in favor of the view that it is unnecessary to modify professions. By sticking with a steady job, sustainable life and lasting relationships might always be guaranteed. Moreover, unlike people who wish to change employment, we do not have to worry about applying for a new job, which is fraught with competitiveness in today's labor markets. From the perspective of companies, they might not have the intention of recruiting temporary positions, this means that permanent employees will receive better treatment and it is tremendously detrimental to the short-term workforce, or even leading a precarious life.
In conclusion, although I recognize that individuals have a right to alter their occupancies, I would assert the advantages of maintaining a job are more significant.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2246017428 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.810042382 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.909090909 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172288996661 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632610300096 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322825778562 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101824598459 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307489653931 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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