Some people think that the only way to judge someone’s success in life is by the amount of money they make.
Is money a true indicator of the success of a life?
In what other ways could success in a life be measured?
Success has many forms to take. Some might believe that, wealth is the form to success whereas others might believe that happiness and psychological relaxation consider as a form of successful lifestyles. Since there are many indicators to judge someone’s form of successful life, it can difficult to say money is the only measure to judge the success. Therefore, other criteria should be required.
There are many people in the world who have achieved a successful life. Some of them could be succeeded financially whereas others succeeded psychologically. For example, Bill Gates is known to be financial successful entrepreneur whereas Gandhi is known for psychological successful person. Those two persons have lived completely different lifestyles. Since most of wealthy people are suffered to be acquiring wealth, they get a lot of stresses and fear of being revealed of their privacy. Therefore, it is difficult to say that the finances are the only indicator to measure one’s successes.
Finance measurement can be seen as only one way to measure the successful lives, therefore, it should be used other indicators to observe different aspects of successes. Other indicators can be used to measure successes such psychological, health and spiritual. For instance, incurable patients may think of successful life as a healthy life whereas other religious people believe that spiritual life is the successful life. Since there are several diverse aspects of life that people are aiming at, it is difficult to claim that there is only one factor to judge successful lifestyles. As a result of this, there are psychological, spiritual, health and personal factors to measure in diverse ways to define the successful lifestyles.
In conclusion, the measurement of successful lives can vary due to the different perspectives and diverse in definition of successes. Thus, the finance measure to indicate someone’s success is only seeing one side of successes and psychological, health and spiritual indicators should be used.
Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239669421488 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.176308539945 0.155533422707 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.137741046832 0.0946595960268 146% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0275482093664 0.0501214627716 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0192837465565 0.0437548338989 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101928374656 0.122226691241 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0440771349862 0.0403226058552 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.12201493928 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0495867768595 0.0326793684256 152% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0578512396694 0.0861772015684 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030303030303 0.021408717616 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00275482093664 0.011925033212 23% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2047.0 1933.35771543 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.45741324921 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406940063091 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.343848580442 0.28420135186 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.246056782334 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.205047318612 0.137316102897 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12201493928 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.037074148 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441640378549 0.56093040696 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.3964751591 60.7387585426 71% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6470588235 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2728750798 49.517814964 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.411764706 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 53.0319168677 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.72839506173 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467677165938 0.332605444948 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13369775586 0.102741220458 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.129565076941 0.0668466124924 194% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.485283464913 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170170081024 0.148594505496 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173041769829 0.134430193775 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096960654333 0.0742795772207 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.458964036602 0.324371583561 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0318032624583 0.0638462369009 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343046777585 0.228012699653 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198834385762 0.058150111329 34% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.68436873747 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.