Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or at countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Inevitably, many people have started living in the suburbs or countrysides. They prefer working in big cities but to live in suburbs. This has resulted in traffic congestion and pollution. It is opine that people should be stimulated to live in the cities and I completely agree with this statement.
To commence with, God made the country and man made the town. It makes clear difference between Urban and rural living. Life in a city or any other city with huge population, is fast and more or less unnatural. Whereas, life in a village is peaceful simple and people are close to one another and nature. Therefore individual move to suburbs for better life. They can enjoy the site of green fields, of fluttering birds, animals and flowers or the beauty of sunset and break of dawn. However, individuals earn a good amount by working in companies located in cities and spend their life in their houses in suburbs. Many offices have their joining and releasing duty timing same. This leads to the traffic congestion on roads and pollution.
Rather, people should be motivated to live in the cities near their workplaces and to use the public transportation instead of private vehicles. Employers should offer them the accommodation near their factories. Moreover government should take an initiative to build new colonies with the modern infrastructure and facilities that should offer better sanitation, healthcare facilities, full protection from criminals that should attract people to live there. Everyone have technology that supports working from home through internet. Many people could avoid travelling and female workers could also work by sitting at their homes as well as they may handle their house work.
To conclude, people and government should together make a resolve to save the environment from traffic and pollution problems. The improved infrastructure, greenery and clean roads will definitely attract people towards urban areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'opined'.
Suggestion: opined
...traffic congestion and pollution. It is opine that people should be stimulated to liv...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...le are close to one another and nature. Therefore individual move to suburbs for be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, as well as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.303514377 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81767040348 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597444089457 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.6283039004 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3684210526 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242119718519 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714693467885 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740683625007 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160238121941 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723706341112 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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