Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It's a arguable question "Where should a child learn to decome a good member of the society?", is it from parents or the school ? According to me everybody has equal responsibility in upbringing of a the young ; be it teacher, or the family. In the following paragraphs I wish to emphasis on both the sides of the argument in detailed.
On one hand, few people think that the duty to develop children in to good citizen is in the hands of the parents. This might be due to the reason that youth spend most of their free time at home and moreover, they are more attached to the family members. Hence, mother and fathers has a great deal of moral obligation to impart ideal social skills in their offsprings. Additionally, children fear their parents more than the teachers, thus they listen will to them.
On the other hand, some may argue that educators and school have more responsibilities when compared to the parent as they are the correct medium of approach for the needed quality enhancements in youngsters. Indeed, teaching institutions have a social and ethical place in providing knowledge in all aspects of life including the moral, and cultural behavior. Therefore, we think it is best to leave theses matters to the educational system than to ask the people at home.
To sum up, no doubt that the younger generations need to understand and integrate well in to the society, but depending on one section of people such as teachers or family members is not a good choice. The duty of instilling such values in children rely on all people in the community, let it be teacher or parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, no doubt, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77857142857 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81540632074 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1697387328 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234424583933 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069675808557 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424177361038 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123799489186 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203193617238 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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