Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society . Others however , believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both this views and give your opinion.
People have a thought that parents should teach children how to be a well behaved member of the emerging society whereas , some believe that school is the place to learn to be a good member of the society . However , I would like to accord with the first notion .
To begin with , I believe that it the foremost responsibility of a parent to teach and educate a child from beginning years of their childhood to develop and inculcate good manners in children . Parents are the role model to their children and a child learns a lot from the actions rather than what you teach them , as actions speaks louder than sounds . Further supporting to
my point of view , it is necessary to built a healthy atmosphere at home as the child spends more time and not in school .
For instance , a kindergarten child spends about three to four hours at school and joins at the age of five where the child has already learnt how to behave while meeting other people . therefore , it lies in the hands of the parents to teach their children how to be a good member of the society .
However , on the other side of the fence , some people believe that school should take all the responsibility to train the child and bring them up as a responsible and a good person in the society . Due to the loaded schedule parents cannot take care of their children and spend really less time with their children perhaps , it is considered that school is a place to learn .
To recapitulate , I strongly believe that parents should teach children in all aspects to be a good human being.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'for instance', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233333333333 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.153333333333 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0633333333333 0.0946595960268 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.0501214627716 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0533333333333 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123333333333 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.02 0.0403226058552 50% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.4629340881 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0633333333333 0.0326793684256 194% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00333333333333 0.00163938923432 203% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.12 0.0861772015684 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0166666666667 0.021408717616 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.02 0.011925033212 168% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1572.0 1933.35771543 81% => OK
No of words: 298.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27516778523 6.12580529183 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.285234899329 0.374742101984 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.181208053691 0.28420135186 64% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0838926174497 0.203846283523 41% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0436241610738 0.137316102897 32% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.4629340881 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.037074148 74% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436241610738 0.56093040696 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.9094833104 60.7387585426 69% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 29.8 20.7743622355 143% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7803451276 49.517814964 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.2 127.492653851 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7743622355 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 3.99599198397 601% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.9208053691 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.52702702703 1.69124875643 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491005101097 0.332605444948 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149512128065 0.102741220458 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0621634551281 0.0668466124924 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.734932005242 0.534860350844 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.20119936578 0.148594505496 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.26105042067 0.134430193775 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118320985113 0.0742795772207 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311626873858 0.324371583561 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.087965794378 0.0638462369009 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321134064485 0.228012699653 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115030573593 0.058150111329 198% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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