Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foreign country rather than living as a separate minority group with different lifestyle. Do you agree or disagree?
t is often believed that, while moving abroad one should adapt to the new culture of that country instead of being confined in a discrete minority group with the dissimilar ways of living. However, it seems critical to adjust with any new tradition, still in order to enjoy the full-fledged benefits of migration a person should acquire the skills of managing both the culture at a time.
Firstly, adaptability is the key prerequisite if someone wants to live in a foreign country, otherwise he will not be able to enjoy the benefits of that particular region and will miss out the opportunities for which he has left his own country. Therefore, if someone can adjust well with the new place he will feel less homesick and can easily grab the opportunity around him. For instance, currently a good number of people from Asia are moving to Canada, they will not be benefited if they decide to live separately.
Secondly, being with the majority is always beneficial in terms of ensuring security. If somebody lives in a new distant place, he will always feel insecure. Nonetheless, if he lives in minority group away from the other people, this will make him feel left alone and will break his confidence. For example, in Bangladesh, Bihari people always tend to live in their own community which hampers the well being of their children as they feel lonely at school. In contrast, it is impossible to leave the indigenous norms and customs entirely, one should nurture their native traditions and pass it to their future generations. Consequently, it will keep the diversity among the regions intact and enrich the overall ethnicity.
In conclusion, accepting a new lifestyle can be troublesome, but for being successful in a new place in terms of grabbing opportunities and having secured life, it is crucial to blend with their way of living. I admit, there should be a proper mingling of both as well as they should not completely abandon their own ethnicity
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: T
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding opportunity'?
Suggestion: the surrounding opportunity
... feel less homesick and can easily grab the opportunity around him. For instance, currently a good number ...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88323353293 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7385784184 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538922155689 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2112942249 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7692307692 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207089144308 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742928093544 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587826533521 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136321951334 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549952280029 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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