Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
During the last twenty years, the professional sport has developed many modern methods to improve their athletes by different forms. Physical strength represents the first and traditional approach to do performance comes, but nowadays this trend had to divide space in the preparation plans with mental strength. Both perspectives have your value and across the years have been used to support athletes in many modalities. This essay will describe shortly each training perspectives but in our opinion, the mental strength deliver more benefits than physical strength.
Professional sports had created a large range of options to develop physical skills. Big numbers of coaches believe that physical preparation is a core to increase performance in sports. To support this idea they are monitoring a lot of physical behavior in your team and use it later do be capable to create an accurate training road map for each one. For instance, the cyclists in "Tour the France" have your physical parameters monitored each step during the race to support the team a better moment to attack or not the peloton.
On the other hand, a significant part of coaches believe that the body follows a good mind. This thought promotes inside your team's initiatives to increases mental health. Nowadays is normal to see professional athletes talking about meditation and mindfulness techniques. For example, the visualization exercises help the athletes create a mental path until your target and make it easier.
Finally, I think both perspectives are relevant to prepare new athletes and they need to be implemented together. But in my experience the mental strength gives more results than physical preparation.
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Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, for example, for instance, i think, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3717472119 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86491951906 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7879876054 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228683030184 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752485553535 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589099325998 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141204957072 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055211873076 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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