Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that to be a good athlete, strength is the key for success in sports fields, while others believe that mental powers are more important than physical power to be success in sports. In my opinion, this argument has both advantages and disadvantages on both sides and this essay will provide suitable reasons and answers with examples for it.
First of all, there are a lot of benefits of strength in sports. The first positive effect is that most of sports require people to have strong enough to play. As a result, if they can not endure during training, they will not play sports effectively. For example, sports such as football, basketball, hiking, and so on, which demand lots of strength to keep up and follow since it consumes much energy to play. Secondly, improving strength will help people avoid many unfortunate accidents that might be happened in the future because their body is strong enough to take some source of damage. For instance, people who play basketball can hurt their hands during the match , however, if they train their bodies, the chances of having accidents will reduce significantly.
On the other hand, we still need to have mental strength since it has lots of advantages for sports players. The first benefit effect is that mental plays an important role in people's motivate since everyone needs targets and morale to do jobs perfectly. Take Olympic athletes, they train extremely hard to achieve medals, and they need to have a high spirit to keep focus on their purpose. In addition, without having mental strength, sports will be less interesting since people just play but do not have ranks to follow, which make them easy to quit sports.
In conclusion, Playing sports is not only needs strength powers but also must have mental powers so people can play with their full passion and more exciting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the sports') or simply say ''most sports''.
Suggestion: most of the sports; most sports
...orts. The first positive effect is that most of sports require people to have strong enough to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 673, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ll can hurt their hands during the match , however, if they train their bodies, th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89206349206 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38971409507 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549206349206 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8815527973 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.538461538 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6153846154 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290011064446 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109649985642 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838776776114 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197515105599 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772436357714 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.