Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people claim that the well-being of people across the region, can be achieved by the administration thereby introducing new ruleswith respect tohealthy food while others believe that it is an individuals’ option as well as responsibility. From my point of view, I opine that it is entirely a persons’ self-choice and control over themselves.
One way is, the government of India can help to improve the quality of whole grain itemswhich they provide every month for free through family ration card like Rice, Wheat, Flour, dhal, etc. Moreover, they have the superior power to control unhealthy foods being sold and bring new amendments for natural healthy fruits and vegetables thereby providing more opportunities for farmers whom are fighting for their lives in today’s world. The administration has the power to ban man-made items, hybrid varieties being exported and circulated throughout the country.
Nevertheless, the authority tries to bring new rules and offer the best of all, it completely depends on an individual who prefer to eat what they wish. We are living in an era that young minds never wants to be forced on food they consume.Even though, there will be minimum possibility for unhygienic food to come inside a country, there are many loop holes it might enter through smuggling. Every educated person in a place will have a basic knowledge on what foods to consume.
To summarize, whatever might be the new rule made by the administration it solely depends on the public whether to follow or not.Nowadays, the government is focused more on sustainable revenue and trade to the country rather than the public. So it should be every person’s duty to follow a healthy life style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14946619217 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99696532218 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637010676157 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3839743559 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.7 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145780286288 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567772583383 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325010417646 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915846232514 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345386432403 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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