Science gives people life expectancy of close to one hundred years or even more. Some people view it in a positive light, but others believe it creates some problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Technology has increased the life period of human beings. The advancement of science has led to increase in the mortality of people around the world. some of us still think that living a longer life is endanger the life of others.
To begin with, Innovation in the filed of medicine has made human being stronger and healthier so that humans can live longer. In the early era, people used to eat healthy foods and lived a happy and long life. the advances in medication has found the solutions to all type of old age ailments and are trying to make a disease-free gene at the beginning age itself so that it can lead a healthy life without any hereditary diseases. There is saying that the old ones are wiser than the younger ones. Wisdom is learnt over time and by undergoing various tests of life.
Secondly, there are other sections of the community who think that dying early is far better than living at old age with ailments. The present generation likes to live as much as they can in their childhood and adulthood and die as soon as they reach old age. The newer section of people think that aged persons are a burden to the family or the to the community. They are fast learners and like to learn as much as they can from others and from the internet instead of learning from the elders.
Life span of an human is considered as an advantage if it is useful to others and not an upper hand if others think as a burden.so In my opinion I would consider that life expectancy should be more so that they transfer their wisdom to the younger generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, still, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45993031359 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35360630988 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540069686411 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9197567748 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4615384615 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120924080118 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465357886748 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377097932302 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827258333773 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407398422369 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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